Mischievous mouse. Munch mild cheese and hiding in its hole like Tuatara. As small as a leaf on a misty moonlight night.
By Ellie
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:
Fantastic fish floating in the ocean. Tail flapping like a fantail. Finding food to feed on. Fabulous.
Aiden
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:
Fast fish. Zooming like an eagle. Finding favourite food. Floating like a balloon. Fat like a ball.
Kotone
Fabulous dog. Furry like a fox’s tail. Four feet, fast and funny. By Skyla
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:
Fast fish. Zooming like an eagle. Finding favourite food. Floating like a balloon. Fat like a ball.
Kotone
I heard people sing loudly in my ear. I felt I was in a dream when I was walking. I saw lots of big sparkly bright masks. I smelled hot salty chips cooking in the oven.
