Mischievous mouse.
Munch mild cheese and hiding in its hole
like Tuatara.
As small as a leaf on a misty moonlight night.

By Ellie

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

Fantastic fish floating in the ocean.
Tail flapping like a fantail.
Finding food to feed on.
Fabulous.

Aiden

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

Fast fish. Zooming like an eagle.
Finding favourite food.
Floating like a balloon.
Fat like a ball.

Kotone

Fabulous dog.
Furry like a fox’s tail.
Four feet, fast and funny.
By Skyla

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

Fast fish. Zooming like an eagle.
Finding favourite food.
Floating like a balloon.
Fat like a ball.

Kotone

I heard people sing loudly in my ear.
I felt I was in a dream when I was walking.
I saw lots of big sparkly bright masks.
I smelled hot salty chips cooking in the oven.

By Quanah

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

Beautiful butterfly.

Flying fast like a fairy.

Floating down like a feather.

Fantastic.

Ana

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

Humpback whale. Fat and as big as the world.
Flipping and floating like a dolphin.
Likes to find food. Funky animal.

Jordan

Flight to England:
I heard the engine buzzing in my ears.
It looked like freezing ice blowing us.
I smelt nice, hot yummy food.
I felt really annoyed when I slept.

Flight to England:
I heard the engine buzzing in my ears.
It looked like freezing ice blowing us.
I smelt nice, hot yummy food.
I felt really annoyed when I slept.

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

Kitten!
As cute and cuddly as a baby chick.
Calm and clever, just like a possum.
Lucy

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:


A tiny little snail lay tucked up in its shell.
As small as a leaf.
Slimy like a slug.

Krystal

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

Foxes, eyes like shining diamonds.
They are as furry as a kitten.
Teeth as sharp as a dinosaur’s.
Super fast.



Foxes are dirtier than dumps.
Dangerous and deadly to deer.
Living in dark dark forests.


Keely

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

A fox is as fast as a furious cheetah.
Furry like a gorilla.
Fantastic creature.
Lives in the forest.

Usha

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

Fantastic fish floating in the ocean.
Tail flapping like a fantail.
Finding food to feed on.
Fabulous.

Jenny and Aiden

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:


Wool Lovely lamb.is soft like a teddy bear.
Cosy warm and cuddly.

Emma

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:


Wool Lovely lamb.is soft like a teddy bear.
Cosy warm and cuddly.

Emma

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

Beautiful birds bouncing in your backyard.
Chirping in the air charming songs.
Like a small balloon bouncing in the breeze.

Yasmina

Dragon fish, Disaster fish.
Chomping teeth.
Dancing in the sea, dangerous to fish.
Diving deep, swimming in the darkness.
Slashing their prey. Tricking fish, razor teeth.
Beautiful swimmers, swimming like a dolphin.
Bioluminescent, glows red or blue.

William

Mask parade

It sounded like people having conversations about how fun it will be, adults chattering about their children, kids whistling low as they walk. I saw colourful masks walking with me, shops with giant labels on top, a giant ferries wheel with screaming children on top, I smelled hot chocolate. With extra marshmallowy smell, impatient to start the mask parade.

Mask parade

It sounded like people having conversations about how fun it will be, adults chattering about their children, kids whistling low as they walk. I saw colourful masks walking with me, shops with giant labels on top, a giant ferries wheel with screaming children on top, I smelled hot chocolate. With extra marshmallowy smell, impatient to start the mask parade.

By Oscar

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

Frog. As fast as a fish.
Cool jumper, funny jumper.
Nice and slimy. Awesome froggy.
Flicking its tongue out at flies.

Ethan

WE ARE G TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

Shark, a sharp chomping jaw.
Slashing its way through the ocean.
Swimming like a jet ski.
Attacking people in shore. LEARNIN

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE)POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

Sparrow.
As small as a mouse curled up asleep.
Squeaking like a human squealing.
Then flies into the sunlight of my backyard.

Eva

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WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

A puppy is as soft as snow.

Cuddly like a pillow.

Cute as a butterfly.

Always playful, pouncing on my teddy.

Arjuna

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

Funny Tuatara.
Hides safely under its hole like a mouse.
Scaly skin. Spikes sharper than a tooth.
Lazy like an owl.

Harry

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE A CONCRETE (SHAPE) POEM USING ALLITERATIONS AND SIMILES:

Seasnake, winding around its prey.
Stays still like a rock to trick its prey.
Ferocious fangs.
Swimming through seaweed.
Swimming deep.

Jay