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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in the dark dark night to the woods. WHOOSH! Jim and Debbie were scared. Suddenly a spaceship came out of nowhere and two freaky aliens came marching towards Jim and Debbie. They said “Hi our names are Thorax and Mokka. Do you want to come to Mokkoucity?” “What’s Mokkoucity?” asked Jim. “We live there, it’s an amazing place. Do you want to come?” asked Thorax. “Yes I do, aye Debbie!” “Sure”, said Debbie. “Come in. We are going to take off soon. Quick!” said Thorax. ZOOM ZOOM. Jim fainted. “What is wrong Jim?” asked Debbie, but he didn’t respond.
“We are at Mokkoucity. Let’s have a party!” said Thorax. “See you two later” said Mokka. WAHOOOO. Then Jim and Debbie were back at their car. “Wow!” they said and they drove home. It was dinner time. “Man, I am so sleepy” said Jim and Debbie.
By Will S
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive through the forest. Then from out of nowhere a spaceship came. Weeb, weeb, weeb! Jim and Debbie hid behind a bush but it was no good, the aliens saw them. Luckily they were nice aliens. One was called Ding Dong because he slept with an alarm clock on all day. The other alien was called Tavooscy because that’s what everybody called him.
“Do you want to come to Zozspliespok?” the aliens asked. “Yes”, said Debbie. So they all went to Zozspliespok. There were aliens everywhere. There were computers, playstations and DSs. They all had a sleepover and the next morning Tavooscy was standing over Jim and Debbie. “Run away!” they shouted.
Jim and Debbie ran back to the spaceship and they flew back home. They ran into the house. Just then Jim’s mum came in. She asked “Why is there an alien’s spaceship in the backyard?” “Long story, long story mum!”
By William F
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive through the forest. Then from out of nowhere a spaceship came. Weeb, weeb, weeb! Jim and Debbie hid behind a bush but it was no good, the aliens saw them. Luckily they were nice aliens. One was called Ding Dong because he slept with an alarm clock on all day. The other alien was called Tavooscy because that’s what everybody called him.
“Do you want to come to Zozspliespok?” the aliens asked. “Yes”, said Debbie. So they all went to Zozspliespok. There were aliens everywhere. There were computers, playstations and DSs. They all had a sleepover and the next morning Tavooscy was standing over Jim and Debbie. “Run away!” they shouted.
Jim and Debbie ran back to the spaceship and they flew back home. They ran into the house. Just then Jim’s mum came in. She asked “Why is there an alien’s spaceship in the backyard?” “Long story, long story mum!”
By William F
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive on a dark night. Suddenly a spaceship came down from the sky. Jim and Debbie were so scared they hid in the bushes.
A friendly alien came out of the spaceship and said “Hi. My name is Alien 1 and this is Alien 2. We are friendly aliens.” “Do you want to come home with us?” asked Jim and Debbie. “Yes!” said Alien 1 so Jim and Debbie took the aliens back to their house. The aliens slept on the floor and ate toilet paper and drank toilet water. They all lived happily ever after.
By Usha
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive on a dark night. Suddenly a spaceship came down from the sky. Jim and Debbie were so scared they hid in the bushes.
A friendly alien came out of the spaceship and said “Hi. My name is Alien 1 and this is Alien 2. We are friendly aliens.” “Do you want to come home with us?” asked Jim and Debbie. “Yes!” said Alien 1 so Jim and Debbie took the aliens back to their house. The aliens slept on the floor and ate toilet paper and drank toilet water. They all lived happily ever after.
By Usha
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive to the park. It was dark and Jim got petrified and jumped out of the car. Debbie followed. She saw a light coming from a spaceship so she hid in the trees with Jim. Aliens came out of the spaceship and their names were Dede and Swifingling.
Jim and Debbie went home and the aliens went with them. One day Jim bought a big fish, the aliens ate fish and spewed in the room. Debbie was sick in the room too because she smelt the fish. Debbie took the aliens back to the spaceship and Jim went back with the aliens. Debbie wanted to go too but she got frightened and ran away. Debbie never saw Jim again.
By Skyla
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive to the park. It was dark and Jim got petrified and jumped out of the car. Debbie followed. She saw a light coming from a spaceship so she hid in the trees with Jim. Aliens came out of the spaceship and their names were Dede and Swifingling.
Jim and Debbie went home and the aliens went with them. One day Jim bought a big fish, the aliens ate fish and spewed in the room. Debbie was sick in the room too because she smelt the fish. Debbie took the aliens back to the spaceship and Jim went back with the aliens. Debbie wanted to go too but she got frightened and ran away. Debbie never saw Jim again.
By Skyla
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive. It was a dark night and they were tired. Suddenly they saw a spaceship! It was spooky and it came down onto the ground right in front of their eyes. They quickly got out of the car and ran into the bushes to hide. Then they saw something come out of the spaceship. It was two little aliens. They said “Can we stay at your house for ever please?” Jim and Debbie said “Yes” and the aliens cheered. But Jim and Debbie said “Only if you don’t mess up the house!” The aliens agreed and stayed and Jim and Debbie’s home for ever and they all lived happily ever after.
By Quanah
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive. It was a dark night and they were tired. Suddenly they saw a spaceship! It was spooky and it came down onto the ground right in front of their eyes. They quickly got out of the car and ran into the bushes to hide. Then they saw something come out of the spaceship. It was two little aliens. They said “Can we stay at your house for ever please?” Jim and Debbie said “Yes” and the aliens cheered. But Jim and Debbie said “Only if you don’t mess up the house!” The aliens agreed and stayed and Jim and Debbie’s home for ever and they all lived happily ever after.
By Quanah
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive into town when all of a sudden a UFO flew down to the car. Jim and Debbie were so terrified that they went and hid in the bush. Then two weird and funny looking aliens hopped out of the UFO. Their names were Bagogo and Snozzcumber. Jim and Debbie took the two aliens back home with them.
The next day Bagoga had an old chair for breakfast instead of cereal. Snozzcumber had a delicate cabinet with autographs in it. Jim said “Not the autographs!” Debbie said “Go easy dad, they’re only aliens.” “Okay,” said Jim.
For lunch Bagoga had fresh boogers and Snozzcumber had a fence. Then they went back to space. Jim and Debbie had fun with the aliens and the aliens had fun too. They will catch up again in the future.
By Oscar
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive into town when all of a sudden a UFO flew down to the car. Jim and Debbie were so terrified that they went and hid in the bush. Then two weird and funny looking aliens hopped out of the UFO. Their names were Bagogo and Snozzcumber. Jim and Debbie took the two aliens back home with them.
The next day Bagoga had an old chair for breakfast instead of cereal. Snozzcumber had a delicate cabinet with autographs in it. Jim said “Not the autographs!” Debbie said “Go easy dad, they’re only aliens.” “Okay,” said Jim.
For lunch Bagoga had fresh boogers and Snozzcumber had a fence. Then they went back to space. Jim and Debbie had fun with the aliens and the aliens had fun too. They will catch up again in the future.
By Oscar
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive into the forest. WHOOSH! Suddenly a spaceship came out of nowhere. Debbie yelled “Come on, get out of the car!” They ran to hide in the bushes but they were too late. The aliens had already come out of the spaceship. The aliens said “Greetings earthlings. Our names are Happy and Funny.”
Happy asked Jim and Debbie if they wanted to come to Swizbow with them. Jim and Debbie said “No!” but the aliens chucked them into the spaceship and took off. When they landed in Swizbow the aliens walked out of the spaceship. Quickly Jim and Debbie ran into the control room and flew off to their home.
By Mackensey
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive into the forest. WHOOSH! Suddenly a spaceship came out of nowhere. Debbie yelled “Come on, get out of the car!” They ran to hide in the bushes but they were too late. The aliens had already come out of the spaceship. The aliens said “Greetings earthlings. Our names are Happy and Funny.”
Happy asked Jim and Debbie if they wanted to come to Swizbow with them. Jim and Debbie said “No!” but the aliens chucked them into the spaceship and took off. When they landed in Swizbow the aliens walked out of the spaceship. Quickly Jim and Debbie ran into the control room and flew off to their home.
By Mackensey
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in the forest. It was a dark night and the bright moon was out. The night was spooky and suddenly Jim and Debbie saw a spaceship. In the spaceship were two little aliens. The spaceship was so spooky that Jim and Debbie went and hid in the dark, dark bushes. The aliens were very scary. The aliens went “WHIRRR!” very loudly.
Jim and Debbie went to say hello to the aliens but it was too late because the aliens took Jim and Debbie into their spaceship. They put Jim and Debbie on a machine and they turned into aliens. They did not like
being aliens. WHISSHHH, and they flew away! When you are an alien you eat bark and sand, bark and sand are yucky. When Jim and Debbie and the two aliens arrived at the alien’s world Jim and Debbie were very pleased that they were aliens!
By Lucy
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in the forest. It was a dark night and the bright moon was out. The night was spooky and suddenly Jim and Debbie saw a spaceship. In the spaceship were two little aliens. The spaceship was so spooky that Jim and Debbie went and hid in the dark, dark bushes. The aliens were very scary. The aliens went “WHIRRR!” very loudly.
Jim and Debbie went to say hello to the aliens but it was too late because the aliens took Jim and Debbie into their spaceship. They put Jim and Debbie on a machine and they turned into aliens. They did not like
being aliens. WHISSHHH, and they flew away! When you are an alien you eat bark and sand, bark and sand are yucky. When Jim and Debbie and the two aliens arrived at the alien’s world Jim and Debbie were very pleased that they were aliens!
By Lucy
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in the forest. It was a dark night. Suddenly a spaceship landed in front of their eyes. WOOOSH! Jim and Debbie were terrified. Jim shouted ‘Get out of the car!” They both got out of the car. Two silly aliens came out of the spaceship. “Greetings my people. Our names are Zig and Zag.”
Debbie and Jim took Zig and Zag back home with them. Zig ate a table for tea and Zag ate a chair. Jim and Debbie said to the aliens “It’s about time you left.” So the aliens pushed a button on their control and the ship appeared. They hopped into their ship and flew away.
By Krystal
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in the forest. It was a dark night. Suddenly a spaceship landed in front of their eyes. WOOOSH! Jim and Debbie were terrified. Jim shouted ‘Get out of the car!” They both got out of the car. Two silly aliens came out of the spaceship. “Greetings my people. Our names are Zig and Zag.”
Debbie and Jim took Zig and Zag back home with them. Zig ate a table for tea and Zag ate a chair. Jim and Debbie said to the aliens “It’s about time you left.” So the aliens pushed a button on their control and the ship appeared. They hopped into their ship and flew away.
By Krystal
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive. It was a dark and spooky night. They took a long time to drive. WHIRRRR, along came a spaceship. Jim and Debbie were very scared! Two spooky aliens came out of the spaceship and their names were Pop and Deby. Jim and Debbie were very scared.
The two aliens, Pop and Deby wanted Jim and Debbie to come into the spaceship so Jim and Debbie went into space. The aliens wanted them to sleep over but Jim and Debbie didn’t want to so they asked if they could go home. Pop and Deby said “Okay.” Jim and Debbie got into a spaceship and went home.
By Kotone
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive. It was a dark and spooky night. They took a long time to drive. WHIRRRR, along came a spaceship. Jim and Debbie were very scared! Two spooky aliens came out of the spaceship and their names were Pop and Deby. Jim and Debbie were very scared.
The two aliens, Pop and Deby wanted Jim and Debbie to come into the spaceship so Jim and Debbie went into space. The aliens wanted them to sleep over but Jim and Debbie didn’t want to so they asked if they could go home. Pop and Deby said “Okay.” Jim and Debbie got into a spaceship and went home.
By Kotone
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in a spooky forest. They saw a creepy spaceship and two aliens came out of it. Jim and Debbie ran towards a big fat tree so they could hide but they were too late because the aliens found them. “Whirrrr!” the aliens said. The aliens were friendly and they all flew back to the alien planet. Jim and Debbie wanted to go back to New Zealand so the aliens zapped them back to New Zealand.
The next night Jim and Debbie went back to the spooky forest. The aliens were still there but they were different. They looked different and they spoke differently too. They said “Hi, we are aliens. Our names are Spikey 1 and Pickchi 2. We are mean, but sometimes we are nice like today.” So Jim and Debbie took the aliens home. The next morning they had breakfast and mum said ‘Why is there an alien spaceship in the backyard?” “I don’t know what you are talking about!” Jim and Debbie said. The aliens stayed there for a very long time.
The next month Jim and Debbie took them back to their spaceship. The spaceship was gone to they had to build another one. The aliens finally went home and Jim and Debbie did miss them!
By Keely
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in a spooky forest. They saw a creepy spaceship and two aliens came out of it. Jim and Debbie ran towards a big fat tree so they could hide but they were too late because the aliens found them. “Whirrrr!” the aliens said. The aliens were friendly and they all flew back to the alien planet. Jim and Debbie wanted to go back to New Zealand so the aliens zapped them back to New Zealand.
The next night Jim and Debbie went back to the spooky forest. The aliens were still there but they were different. They looked different and they spoke differently too. They said “Hi, we are aliens. Our names are Spikey 1 and Pickchi 2. We are mean, but sometimes we are nice like today.” So Jim and Debbie took the aliens home. The next morning they had breakfast and mum said ‘Why is there an alien spaceship in the backyard?” “I don’t know what you are talking about!” Jim and Debbie said. The aliens stayed there for a very long time.
The next month Jim and Debbie took them back to their spaceship. The spaceship was gone to they had to build another one. The aliens finally went home and Jim and Debbie did miss them!
By Keely
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in the night. Suddenly a creepy spaceship came down and Jim and Debbie ran and hid in the bushes. They were terrified! The spaceship made a strange noise. Two marshmallow aliens came out of the spaceship. Their names were Gong and Ming.
Jim and Debbie took the aliens to the park and the aliens started eating bark. Jim and Debbie thought the aliens were strange so they took them back to the spaceship. Jim and Debbie told the aliens to follow their car back to their house. They invited the aliens to stay but there wasn’t enough room in the house so Gong and Ming had to go back home.
By Jordan
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in the night. Suddenly a creepy spaceship came down and Jim and Debbie ran and hid in the bushes. They were terrified! The spaceship made a strange noise. Two marshmallow aliens came out of the spaceship. Their names were Gong and Ming.
Jim and Debbie took the aliens to the park and the aliens started eating bark. Jim and Debbie thought the aliens were strange so they took them back to the spaceship. Jim and Debbie told the aliens to follow their car back to their house. They invited the aliens to stay but there wasn’t enough room in the house so Gong and Ming had to go back home.
By Jordan
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive through the forest in the middle of the night. Jim and Debbie felt really scared and frightened. Just then a spaceship came zooming right in front of them. When they saw the spaceship they got out of the car and hid in the bushes. They were in the green bushes when suddenly two weird looking aliens hopped out of the spaceship. Their names were Snotty and Eyeball Soup.
As soon as Snotty and Eyeball Soup saw Jim and Debbie they pushed them into their spaceship and zoomed off to Tim-tom-too. When Jim and Debbie were in Tim-tom-too they wanted to stay there because it was so cool. It had roller coasters and other exciting things like that. Jim and Debbie lived happily ever after on Tim-tom-too.
By Jonny
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive through the forest in the middle of the night. Jim and Debbie felt really scared and frightened. Just then a spaceship came zooming right in front of them. When they saw the spaceship they got out of the car and hid in the bushes. They were in the green bushes when suddenly two weird looking aliens hopped out of the spaceship. Their names were Snotty and Eyeball Soup.
As soon as Snotty and Eyeball Soup saw Jim and Debbie they pushed them into their spaceship and zoomed off to Tim-tom-too. When Jim and Debbie were in Tim-tom-too they wanted to stay there because it was so cool. It had roller coasters and other exciting things like that. Jim and Debbie lived happily ever after on Tim-tom-too.
By Jonny
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive into the forest. When they had only got halfway there, an alien spaceship came down right in front of the car! They heard a WHIRRRRRR as it landed. “Quick!” shouted Debbie. Out hopped two aliens. “Greetings earthlings. We come from Mars. Would you like to come to Mars?” “No!” said Jim but the aliens dragged them in anyway.
When they arrived at Mars the aliens made Jim and Debbie have dust for breakfast. They didn’t like it; they said “Yuck!” Mars was creepy and the aliens sent them to work, cleaning their house. Jim and Debbie had to live there for the rest of their lives.
By Jay
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive into the forest. When they had only got halfway there, an alien spaceship came down right in front of the car! They heard a WHIRRRRRR as it landed. “Quick!” shouted Debbie. Out hopped two aliens. “Greetings earthlings. We come from Mars. Would you like to come to Mars?” “No!” said Jim but the aliens dragged them in anyway.
When they arrived at Mars the aliens made Jim and Debbie have dust for breakfast. They didn’t like it; they said “Yuck!” Mars was creepy and the aliens sent them to work, cleaning their house. Jim and Debbie had to live there for the rest of their lives.
By Jay
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in the forest at night. They saw a spaceship and they were very scared so they hid behind a bush. Jim and Debbie heard a loud WHIRRRR. Suddenly they saw two weird aliens come out. Jim took one of the aliens and Debbie took the other alien. They took them home to their house. In the morning Jim said “What do you want for breakfast?” “I want eyeball soup!” they said. “Oh no!” Then the aliens strangled Jim so Debbie ran out to the car and drove off to her grandma’s. The aliens left Jim (the dead man) and flew back to the alien kingdom.
By Harry
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in the forest at night. They saw a spaceship and they were very scared so they hid behind a bush. Jim and Debbie heard a loud WHIRRRR. Suddenly they saw two weird aliens come out. Jim took one of the aliens and Debbie took the other alien. They took them home to their house. In the morning Jim said “What do you want for breakfast?” “I want eyeball soup!” they said. “Oh no!” Then the aliens strangled Jim so Debbie ran out to the car and drove off to her grandma’s. The aliens left Jim (the dead man) and flew back to the alien kingdom.
By Harry
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive down the road. It turned out to be a long drive and a very dark spooky night. Suddenly Jim and Debbie heard a noise. CRASH, BANG, BANG! It was a flying saucer. “Hide, hide!” said Debbie. “I’m scared!” said Jim. Jim and Debbie ran as fast as they could the bushes. It was a very prickly and bumpy bush. WHIRRRR! “What’s that?” yelled Debbie.
Two froggy looking aliens jumped out of the flying saucer. “Hi. My name is Cumby, his name is Gumby. Do you want to come for a ride?” Cumby pulled Jim and Debbie into the flying saucer. “Do you want me to tell you a bed time story about the place we are taking you?” asked Gumby. “Okay,” said Jim. ‘Well, we are taking you a big humungous palace full of cobwebs and spooky spiders. Also there’s a tiny tiny attic where Cumby and I keep our interesting things that we see floating in space.” “I’m a bit tired,” yawned Jim. “Same,” said Debbie. They both fell asleep.
In the morning when Jim and Debbie woke up Jim realized that Gumby was sleeping on him. Jim kicked Gumby off him. Gumby went flying up to the roof and bumped the tip of his nose and landed SPLAT on his tummy.
Debbie said “What’s for breakfast?” Cumby said “Either bark or sand.” “Yuck!” said Jim
and Debbie, “Do you have anything else?” “Don’t you like bark or sand? Did you know bark and sand are the yummiest breakfast in the world?”
“I want to go home,” whispered Debbie. “Same!” said Jim. “Should we get out of the flying saucer and then jump?” “Okay, but how do you open the door?” asked Debbie. “Try pressing all the buttons,” said Jim. “Okay, but what happens if I press the wrong button?” “I don’t know, don’t ask me!” said Jim. “I’m not sure about this Jim!” said Debbie. “Don’t worry. It’ll be fine, just fine. I’ll do the top row, you do the bottom row,” said Jim. “Okay. Jim, what do you think the green buttons are for?” asked Debbie. “I don’t know, just press it alright! Bamboo sticks and poisonous trees!!!” said Jim.
Jim didn’t know what was happening. He could feel the flying saucer vibrating. “I knew I shouldn’t have pressed the green button!” “What’s wrong with you?” asked Debbie. “Are we flying?”said Jim. “AAAAAAH!” said Jim and Debbie. Crash, bang, splat! The flying saucer crashed through an old cracking window. “OUCH!!!” Jim and Debbie screamed.
“I wonder who lived in here?” whispered Debbie. “Whoever does live in here, I bet him or her will be very cross with us,” said Jim. “Hey, what does that sign say? ‘This is no one’s house.’ Shall we live in here?” asked Debbie. “Yes!” said Jim and they lived happily ever after.
Eva
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive down the road. It turned out to be a long drive and a very dark spooky night. Suddenly Jim and Debbie heard a noise. CRASH, BANG, BANG! It was a flying saucer. “Hide, hide!” said Debbie. “I’m scared!” said Jim. Jim and Debbie ran as fast as they could the bushes. It was a very prickly and bumpy bush. WHIRRRR! “What’s that?” yelled Debbie.
Two froggy looking aliens jumped out of the flying saucer. “Hi. My name is Cumby, his name is Gumby. Do you want to come for a ride?” Cumby pulled Jim and Debbie into the flying saucer. “Do you want me to tell you a bed time story about the place we are taking you?” asked Gumby. “Okay,” said Jim. ‘Well, we are taking you a big humungous palace full of cobwebs and spooky spiders. Also there’s a tiny tiny attic where Cumby and I keep our interesting things that we see floating in space.” “I’m a bit tired,” yawned Jim. “Same,” said Debbie. They both fell asleep.
In the morning when Jim and Debbie woke up Jim realized that Gumby was sleeping on him. Jim kicked Gumby off him. Gumby went flying up to the roof and bumped the tip of his nose and landed SPLAT on his tummy.
Debbie said “What’s for breakfast?” Cumby said “Either bark or sand.” “Yuck!” said Jim
and Debbie, “Do you have anything else?” “Don’t you like bark or sand? Did you know bark and sand are the yummiest breakfast in the world?”
“I want to go home,” whispered Debbie. “Same!” said Jim. “Should we get out of the flying saucer and then jump?” “Okay, but how do you open the door?” asked Debbie. “Try pressing all the buttons,” said Jim. “Okay, but what happens if I press the wrong button?” “I don’t know, don’t ask me!” said Jim. “I’m not sure about this Jim!” said Debbie. “Don’t worry. It’ll be fine, just fine. I’ll do the top row, you do the bottom row,” said Jim. “Okay. Jim, what do you think the green buttons are for?” asked Debbie. “I don’t know, just press it alright! Bamboo sticks and poisonous trees!!!” said Jim.
Jim didn’t know what was happening. He could feel the flying saucer vibrating. “I knew I shouldn’t have pressed the green button!” “What’s wrong with you?” asked Debbie. “Are we flying?”said Jim. “AAAAAAH!” said Jim and Debbie. Crash, bang, splat! The flying saucer crashed through an old cracking window. “OUCH!!!” Jim and Debbie screamed.
“I wonder who lived in here?” whispered Debbie. “Whoever does live in here, I bet him or her will be very cross with us,” said Jim. “Hey, what does that sign say? ‘This is no one’s house.’ Shall we live in here?” asked Debbie. “Yes!” said Jim and they lived happily ever after.
Eva
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive out in the forest. It was a dark night and they were feeling scared. Suddenly a spaceship came in front of the car. Jim and Debbie hid behind the bushes and heard a loud WHIRRRING noise. They were terrified! Two froggy aliens jumped out of the spaceship. Before they knew it the spaceship took off with Jim and Debbie and they landed on the planet Frogagon.
The aliens pushed Jim and Debbie to the Frog King’s throne. When the froggy aliens weren’t looking Jim and Debbie ran back into the spaceship. The spaceship took off and it landed tight in front of the car. Jim and Debbie were so frightened they drove all the way home super quick.
By Ethan
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive out in the forest. It was a dark night and they were feeling scared. Suddenly a spaceship came in front of the car. Jim and Debbie hid behind the bushes and heard a loud WHIRRRING noise. They were terrified! Two froggy aliens jumped out of the spaceship. Before they knew it the spaceship took off with Jim and Debbie and they landed on the planet Frogagon.
The aliens pushed Jim and Debbie to the Frog King’s throne. When the froggy aliens weren’t looking Jim and Debbie ran back into the spaceship. The spaceship took off and it landed tight in front of the car. Jim and Debbie were so frightened they drove all the way home super quick.
By Ethan
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive. It was a dark quiet night and the moon shone brightly. Suddenly they heard a scary noise. Up in front of Jim and Debbie was a spaceship and out popped an alien.
Jim and Debbie went and hid behind a bush. The space-ship went WHIRRRRR! The aliens told Jim and Debbie they had to stand on a machine and they would be turned into aliens. They would have to eat sand and bark.
Jim and Debbie were very pleased that they were aliens!
Emma
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive. It was a dark quiet night and the moon shone brightly. Suddenly they heard a scary noise. Up in front of Jim and Debbie was a spaceship and out popped an alien.
Jim and Debbie went and hid behind a bush. The space-ship went WHIRRRRR! The aliens told Jim and Debbie they had to stand on a machine and they would be turned into aliens. They would have to eat sand and bark.
Jim and Debbie were very pleased that they were aliens!
Emma
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One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive. They were driving along the road when a creepy UFO swooped down from the trees. Jim and Debbie ran to hide in the bushes. Jim and Debbie were so freaked out! Just at that minute two hairy aliens jumped out of the UFO. Jim and Debbie screamed!!
The aliens took Jim and Debbie to Mars, but the aliens were friendly. When they got to Mars they had some food. There were aliens everywhere. The next day Jim and Debbie went home. The aliens said they could visit again soon.
By Ellie
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive. They were driving along the road when a creepy UFO swooped down from the trees. Jim and Debbie ran to hide in the bushes. Jim and Debbie were so freaked out! Just at that minute two hairy aliens jumped out of the UFO. Jim and Debbie screamed!!
The aliens took Jim and Debbie to Mars, but the aliens were friendly. When they got to Mars they had some food. There were aliens everywhere. The next day Jim and Debbie went home. The aliens said they could visit again soon.
By Ellie
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE CREATIVE STORIES:
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive. All of a sudden a spaceship came out of the bushes. Jim and Debbie got out of the car and ran into the bushes. There was a big noise WHIRRRRRR. Jim and Debbie came out of the bushes and went over to the spaceship. One alien came out. “Greetings, hello, welcome. My name is Blobby.” A second alien came out and it was angry. His name was Angry!
Debbie said that she was tired. “Have a sleep in my bed,” said Blobby. “Thank you!” said Debbie and she went into the spaceship. In the morning Debbie woke up but couldn’t find Jim anywhere. “Where’s Jim?” she asked. “In Poff Poff,” said the aliens. “Where’s Poff Poff?” asked Debbie. “In the kitchen,” said the aliens. Debbie found Jim again. “I don’t like this place!” cried Debbie. “Me too. Let’s get out of here!” said Jim. “I have a plan!”
That night Jim got the key for the door. Jim and Debbie jumped out of the spaceship and they landed on the ground by the car. They jumped into the car and drove home.
Desiah
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive. All of a sudden a spaceship came out of the bushes. Jim and Debbie got out of the car and ran into the bushes. There was a big noise WHIRRRRRR. Jim and Debbie came out of the bushes and went over to the spaceship. One alien came out. “Greetings, hello, welcome. My name is Blobby.” A second alien came out and it was angry. His name was Angry!
Debbie said that she was tired. “Have a sleep in my bed,” said Blobby. “Thank you!” said Debbie and she went into the spaceship. In the morning Debbie woke up but couldn’t find Jim anywhere. “Where’s Jim?” she asked. “In Poff Poff,” said the aliens. “Where’s Poff Poff?” asked Debbie. “In the kitchen,” said the aliens. Debbie found Jim again. “I don’t like this place!” cried Debbie. “Me too. Let’s get out of here!” said Jim. “I have a plan!”
That night Jim got the key for the door. Jim and Debbie jumped out of the spaceship and they landed on the ground by the car. They jumped into the car and drove home.
Desiah
WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE CREATIVE STORIES:
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in the forest. It was a very dark night. All of a sudden a spaceship arrived on the road. They ran to a tree and hid. Jim and Debbie heard a loud noise, they were creeped out! They were shocked to see two funny looking aliens come out of the spaceship. When Jim and Debbie saw the aliens they fainted. When they fainted the two funny looking aliens took Jim and Debbie into the UFO.
When Jim and Debbie woke up they saw that they were in the UFO. The aliens took Jim and Debbie to out of space and they all had a party.
By Ana
One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in the forest. It was a very dark night. All of a sudden a spaceship arrived on the road. They ran to a tree and hid. Jim and Debbie heard a loud noise, they were creeped out! They were shocked to see two funny looking aliens come out of the spaceship. When Jim and Debbie saw the aliens they fainted. When they fainted the two funny looking aliens took Jim and Debbie into the UFO.
When Jim and Debbie woke up they saw that they were in the UFO. The aliens took Jim and Debbie to out of space and they all had a party.
By Ana
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