Thursday

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE CREATIVE STORIES:

One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive into the forest. When they had only got halfway there, an alien spaceship came down right in front of the car! They heard a WHIRRRRRR as it landed. “Quick!” shouted Debbie. Out hopped two aliens. “Greetings earthlings. We come from Mars. Would you like to come to Mars?” “No!” said Jim but the aliens dragged them in anyway.

When they arrived at Mars the aliens made Jim and Debbie have dust for breakfast. They didn’t like it; they said “Yuck!” Mars was creepy and the aliens sent them to work, cleaning their house. Jim and Debbie had to live there for the rest of their lives.

By Jay

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