Thursday

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE CREATIVE STORIES:

One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in the dark dark night to the woods. WHOOSH! Jim and Debbie were scared. Suddenly a spaceship came out of nowhere and two freaky aliens came marching towards Jim and Debbie. They said “Hi our names are Thorax and Mokka. Do you want to come to Mokkoucity?” “What’s Mokkoucity?” asked Jim. “We live there, it’s an amazing place. Do you want to come?” asked Thorax. “Yes I do, aye Debbie!” “Sure”, said Debbie. “Come in. We are going to take off soon. Quick!” said Thorax. ZOOM ZOOM. Jim fainted. “What is wrong Jim?” asked Debbie, but he didn’t respond.

“We are at Mokkoucity. Let’s have a party!” said Thorax. “See you two later” said Mokka. WAHOOOO. Then Jim and Debbie were back at their car. “Wow!” they said and they drove home. It was dinner time. “Man, I am so sleepy” said Jim and Debbie.

By Will S

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