Thursday

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE CREATIVE STORIES:

One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive to the park. It was dark and Jim got petrified and jumped out of the car. Debbie followed. She saw a light coming from a spaceship so she hid in the trees with Jim. Aliens came out of the spaceship and their names were Dede and Swifingling.

Jim and Debbie went home and the aliens went with them. One day Jim bought a big fish, the aliens ate fish and spewed in the room. Debbie was sick in the room too because she smelt the fish. Debbie took the aliens back to the spaceship and Jim went back with the aliens. Debbie wanted to go too but she got frightened and ran away. Debbie never saw Jim again.

By Skyla

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