Thursday

WE ARE LEARNING TO WRITE CREATIVE STORIES:

One evening last summer Jim and Debbie took a drive in a spooky forest. They saw a creepy spaceship and two aliens came out of it. Jim and Debbie ran towards a big fat tree so they could hide but they were too late because the aliens found them. “Whirrrr!” the aliens said. The aliens were friendly and they all flew back to the alien planet. Jim and Debbie wanted to go back to New Zealand so the aliens zapped them back to New Zealand.

The next night Jim and Debbie went back to the spooky forest. The aliens were still there but they were different. They looked different and they spoke differently too. They said “Hi, we are aliens. Our names are Spikey 1 and Pickchi 2. We are mean, but sometimes we are nice like today.” So Jim and Debbie took the aliens home. The next morning they had breakfast and mum said ‘Why is there an alien spaceship in the backyard?” “I don’t know what you are talking about!” Jim and Debbie said. The aliens stayed there for a very long time.

The next month Jim and Debbie took them back to their spaceship. The spaceship was gone to they had to build another one. The aliens finally went home and Jim and Debbie did miss them!

By Keely

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